Okay, as of this morning I have a brand new rough story outline. The last things are completely disjointed and will probably see great change, but having this really helps for where I am now. Which is, Chapter 5. Chapters 1, 2, and 4 are more or less fine for this draft, Chapter 3 needs a ton of revision but I'm leaving that for later, and so now I'm working on Chapter 5.

Still have trouble pinning down K's voice. Is she taciturn and clipped or freely sarcastic? I want both, but I haven't figured out how to balance it.